I love animated videos. Here is one by me :)) "The Belated Award"

Posted On 3/20/2021 1:54:00 AM, 0Comments

The Belated Award Last Version

Posted On 2/24/2021 10:36:00 PM, 0Comments

I was very excited after finished my essay. I alredy loved writing but it was a great experience for me.

 

Teacher Feedback for the second essay

Posted On 2/24/2021 4:33:00 PM, 0Comments

This section i just corrected my grammatical mistakes. Therefor, i did not feel any difficulty.

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Second Draft of the second essay

Posted On 2/23/2021 4:29:00 PM, 0Comments

I corrected my grammatical mistakes and changed my introductory and concluding sentences effectively.

Peer Feedback for the second essay

Posted On 2/22/2021 11:16:00 PM, 0Comments

This episode was pretty tough for me. My friend had found many of my mistakes and he said my introductory sentence was not impressive. It was quite tiring to fix all of this.

The Belated Award First Draft

Posted On 2/22/2021 11:13:00 PM, 0Comments

Frankly, I had a little difficulty getting started. I had an outline in front of me but I didn't know how to connect it.

 

Last Version of Kevin Carter

Posted On 2/22/2021 4:07:00 PM, 0Comments

My position was above a truly experienced tragedy. That's why I spent so much an emotional process. I was also happy to have completed my first essay.

 

 

Teacher Feedback for Kevin Carter

Posted On 2/21/2021 11:05:00 PM, 0Comments

There was not much in this section except my grammer mistakes, so i didn't have any difficulties.

Second Draft Of Kevin Carter

Posted On 2/21/2021 2:01:00 PM, 0Comments

I can say that is no different from first essay I wrote. I only changed very little things.

 

Peer Feedback Version

Posted On 2/20/2021 8:59:00 PM, 0Comments

We just learned to give feedback. So my friend couldn't find much of my fault.