When I started this essay, I knew what to do because i have outline in front of me. That's why I had no trouble. I started writing and just finished. There were places where i felt so emotional while writing.
I corrected all my mistakes and wrote the final version. I sure that my sentences are clear. And as a result, the outline helped me a lot while writing the article.
After getting my first feedback, I noticed that i was getting things wrong. Instead of writing sentences clearly, i just wrote what it was about. Except this, I made some word mistakes. After editing them, I had no other difficulty in this part.
About Me
Hello! I am Senanur Hazırbulan. I was born in Sivas on November 11, 2003. I have been living here since i was born. I live with my family of 4 people - my mom, dad, little brother and me. I have graduated from the Ziya Gökalp Secondary School in 2017. I started learning guitar in my secondary school years. This is how i met the music and since then music has always been in my life. I also started learning piano and violin. I have always been interested in other cultures. For this reason, I chose the only high school with a preparatory class in Sivas, that is, Prof. Dr. Necati Erşen Social Scienes High School. I improved my English quite a lot in the prep class. In this years, I started to read more books and I witnessed a lot of social inequality. When this stiation started to bother me, I decided what to do in the future. I want to study law to fight against all these injustices and inequalities. This is my 4th year in high school and I'm studing a lot. I hope I can be succesful lawyer in the future.