I was very excited after finished my essay. I alredy loved writing but it was a great experience for me.
This section i just corrected my grammatical mistakes. Therefor, i did not feel any difficulty.
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I corrected my grammatical mistakes and changed my introductory and concluding sentences effectively.
This episode was pretty tough for me. My friend had found many of my mistakes and he said my introductory sentence was not impressive. It was quite tiring to fix all of this.
Frankly, I had a little difficulty getting started. I had an outline in front of me but I didn't know how to connect it.
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My position was above a truly experienced tragedy. That's why I spent so much an emotional process. I was also happy to have completed my first essay.
There was not much in this section except my grammer mistakes, so i didn't have any difficulties.
I can say that is no different from first essay I wrote. I only changed very little things.
We just learned to give feedback. So my friend couldn't find much of my fault.
