My Animated Video: "A Girl With Torn Boots"

Posted On 3/20/2021 1:35:00 AM, 0Comments

There it's "A Girl With Torn Boots"!

Posted On 2/25/2021 3:22:00 PM, 0Comments

I learned lots of information during this process.

Feedback Version of A Girl With Torn Boots!

Posted On 2/24/2021 11:50:00 PM, 0Comments

My teacher Gizem gave feedback for my essay to be better. I'm gonna fix these mistakes on final version.

Second Draft of A Girl With Torn Boots!

Posted On 2/24/2021 5:14:00 PM, 0Comments

I think i learnt lots of information about writing essay and i did what i learned. 

Feedback Version of A Girl With Torn Boots!

Posted On 2/23/2021 11:08:00 PM, 0Comments

My friend Zümra gave feedback for my essay to be better. I saw my mistakes and I'm gonna fix these mistakes on final version.

First Draft of A Girl With Torn Boots!

Posted On 2/23/2021 8:07:00 PM, 0Comments

My teacher gave us subject for write an essay. I think this will be great because i did good job on my first essay.

 

There it is, the last version. The Atlanta Murders!

Posted On 2/22/2021 11:02:00 PM, 0Comments

I'm so happy with the final version. This process has been very good for me. I have learnt tons of information about writing essay. Here it's the Atlanta Murders! 

 

My Teacher Gave Feedback for My Essay the Atlanta Murders!

Posted On 2/22/2021 9:20:00 PM, 0Comments

 My teacher gave feedback to me and I saw tons of mistakes. I want write all of paragraphs because I know I can write better than this version.

Second Draft of My Essay the Atlanta Murders!

Posted On 2/21/2021 11:58:00 PM, 0Comments

I think it is better than the first draft.

I’m excited for the last version.

I had lots of work to do but it was fun. 

 

 

Feedback Version of My Essay the Atlanta Murders!

Posted On 2/21/2021 10:10:00 PM, 0Comments

This is my first draft of my essay. It was fun for me I mean writing part.

My dear friend Meltem gave me feedback for my spelling mistakes.