I wrote my essay’s first draft. I knew, i had a lots of mistakes but it will flow with feedbacks.
This is my outline. It is gonna get better day by day.
I am sure this whole feedback will be very useful for me to revise my outline. A very fruitful process!
It was so excited for me and I’m so happy for being part of this project.
I think these events will be helpful for my academic career.
My name is Eray Yalman and I am 17. I am a junior student in Prof. Dr. Necati Erşen Social Science High School. First, let me say that I have a slightly different world perspective than my peers. It’s like awareness about the life.
I’m always eager to learn. I try to develop my knowledge and skills in every possible area. I’m a theatre actor and I've been in a lot of theater plays. I play basketball in the local team. I love digital drawing. I’m keen on concept art and I want be a concept artist. I’m totally cinephile. I’m into festival films. My favorite directors are Andrei Tarkovsky and Nuri Bilge Ceylan. Their styles are similar to each other. It’s most like chill and it doesn’t tell viewers everything that happened. I believe love is everything. I mean I’m totally man of culture. :)