I learned lots of information during this process.
My teacher Gizem gave feedback for my essay to be better. I'm gonna fix these mistakes on final version.
I think i learnt lots of information about writing essay and i did what i learned. 
My friend Zümra gave feedback for my essay to be better. I saw my mistakes and I'm gonna fix these mistakes on final version.
My teacher gave us subject for write an essay. I think this will be great because i did good job on my first essay.
I'm so happy with the final version. This process has been very good for me. I have learnt tons of information about writing essay. Here it's the Atlanta Murders!
My teacher gave feedback to me and I saw tons of mistakes. I want write all of paragraphs because I know I can write better than this version.
I think it is better than the first draft.
I’m excited for the last version.
I had lots of work to do but it was fun.
This is my first draft of my essay. It was fun for me I mean writing part.
My dear friend Meltem gave me feedback for my spelling mistakes.
