Here is my animated video: "One of Billions Strong and Unique Women"

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Last Version of the Second Essay!

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 I was so proud of that woman while I was writing her life. And when I was describing the difficulties of her life, I really tried hard and for people to understand.

My Teacher's feedback for second essay

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Second draft of my essay after I got feedback from my friend

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my Friend's Feedback for second essay

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It was funny because she just fixed the small letters 

First Draft of My Second Essay ( One of 748484 unique women)

Posted On 2/22/2021 2:31:00 PM, 0Comments

It was an essay that i wrote for the second time but I was nervous while writing because i did not determine the subject and I constantly looked at the outline but I really liked it more then my first essay 

Last version of Coco Chanel Essay!

Posted On 2/21/2021 11:31:00 PM, 0Comments

This is my final version of Coco Chanel essay. I had difficulty changing my sentences as result of the feedbacks I received not writing and this turned out as a result. 

Teacher Feedback for my coco chanel essay

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This is my teacher's feedback

 

coco chanel essay after my friend's feedback

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This was the result of my friend's feedback but it's almost exactly the same as the first.

my first essay's Feedback that my friend gave it to me

Posted On 2/20/2021 7:22:00 PM, 0Comments

I had a hard time giving feedback to my friends and they also had trouble giving me feedback.It was the first thing we did and we didnt know where to pay attention so all they could give was a capitalization error.