I was so proud of that woman while I was writing her life. And when I was describing the difficulties of her life, I really tried hard and for people to understand.
It was funny because she just fixed the small letters
It was an essay that i wrote for the second time but I was nervous while writing because i did not determine the subject and I constantly looked at the outline but I really liked it more then my first essay 
This is my final version of Coco Chanel essay. I had difficulty changing my sentences as result of the feedbacks I received not writing and this turned out as a result.
This is my teacher's feedback
This was the result of my friend's feedback but it's almost exactly the same as the first.
I had a hard time giving feedback to my friends and they also had trouble giving me feedback.It was the first thing we did and we didnt know where to pay attention so all they could give was a capitalization error.