It was an essay I wrote, establishing and enjoying my own sentences. these events are still happening, but I hope they will end. I could have been one of those girls, I understand them.
Thank you to my teacher for giving me feedback. I love her so much!
I enjoyed writing this essay because I think I conveyed my own feelings and thoughts in a very beautiful way. I hope you will enjoy reading!
Thank you to my teacher for giving me feedback. it was important to me because it's important to know the truth.
The final version of my essay.
thank my friend for correcting my mistakes. I've never been able to write the word 'explosion' lol, but now I'm sure I'll write it correctly for the rest of my life.