This is my las version of my second essay. Writing about this subject tought me the importance of family, nature and love. I loved writing thanks to this project. I am so happy with my last version of my essay. It was a graet experience for me. Again i'm so proud of myself.
This part was not diffucult but i saw that i have lots of mistakes. I corrected my grammer mistakes, insufficient sentences and spelling mistakes. I hope it looks better.
I fixed the mistakes and it looks better. I learned how to spell some words.
My friend Meltem gave feedback for my essay. I will fix these mistakes to make my essay better.
This was my second essay and this was easier than my first essay. Because i had prepared outline this time. It was easy to start but making body paragraphs was a little hard. While writing this essay i was sensitive.
This is my final version of chernobyl disaster essay. I had some difficult times because of changing my sentences but in the end I am so proud of myself. Writing about this topic was very difficult and enjoyable for me.
There was spelling mistakes and some insufficient sentences. Also some grammer mistakes.
I fixed the mistakes but i think it was exact the same with my first draft. There wasn't much difference between them.
I had trouble with giving feedback like my friends because that was our first and we didn't know how to give.
